Eyes weighed down like lead
I lower my head.
Memory kicks in,
And I remember:
I have the D.
Nothing’s so simple.
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Eyes weighed down like lead
I lower my head.
Memory kicks in,
And I remember:
I have the D.
Nothing’s so simple.
I love that you wrote a simple poem to express the complicated truth.
I’m glad that you liked it 🙂 I felt like I was “taking a gamble” in taking such a simple approach. I am relieved that it worked out.
So true. Those High blood sugars, or heck those Lows too. Never simple, not as much as it should be. Short and sweet (no pun there!), nice job!
Thank you! I am glad that you liked it. I was trying to capture some of the difficulties of diabetes in a simple manner. I am glad that I have been able to bring to mind a couple of them in your mind.
Yes, that last line says it all. Fantastic poem.
Thank you!
Simple and concise. I like it. I sense a lot of sadness in it. I’m looking forward to reading your posts tomorrow and Thursday based on their themes – I imagine they’ll tie to this poem.
I am glad you liked it.
The post for Wednesday is ready to be posted right now. I am just waiting for it to technically to be Wednesday before publishing it. As for Thursday’s post – I myself don’t even know what I am going to write! We’ll have to wait and see…
One simple truth remembered and it all floods to the foreground, eh? Nice job.
Thank you! Sometimes less is, in fact, more. I would do well to remember that more often!
Nothing about D is simple. Great Poem
I am glad you liked it 🙂